Can you give me an opinion of this poem I wrote?
536494
I felt it. I was in it. Ever thought of writing a book of poems? At least look into getting this one published. And this is from a person not into poetry. Very good.
1087160
please will u write the meaning of this question ?
666947
haha written just for you and thanks for another 2 pts. \n\ni wanted to write a poem to show you that i'm sorry\nbut my poor englsh is worst then dreaded cancers,\nso in order to appologise for my mistakes\nall i could do was ask yahoo answers,\nsome stranger wrote this poem for you\nbecuase i think as bad as i write,\ni just hope you will forgive me\ncause i do not want to fight.\n\n\ntada there you go :-)
586887
He is telling of a woman with whom he knew as a child. She was a beautiful girl and grew into a lovely woman. He danced with her in school and realized that she had grown up.\nLater, as an adult, he read in the paper of her committing suicide by leaping out of a downtown hotel window. He was saddened by this of course.\nThe poem is him recalling her as a young girl and how he felt about her suicide.
332035
Sure, but you're question is a bit vague. What, specifically, do you want to know? I can type out the entire poem for you, if that's what you need.
900519
This was a very good poem. I like to write poems too and I thought this one had a lot of feeling in it. You definitely get the message when you read it.
476283
Here's a little poem I wrote for a dear friend whom I love so: The Song of Love\n\nSo many a time has a woman passed by \nand cause my eyes to yearn.\nMany a lady has my senses stunned \nand my body began to burn. \n\nBut these are the things that fade with time,\nthe beauty we all croon. \nWe live, look, admire, and smile\nand nature sings its tune.\n\nThere’s another song that wells within; \nit’s magic I must presume.\nFor its sound fills the voids \nfor which nature can’t consume.\n\nThe song is passion and is full of strength\nand ruled by desires within. \nIt falters and fades if we let it \nand leaves us empty again. \n\nThere is a song that is stronger \nand can be awakened still.\nIts name is love and is fragile \nand comes out of a humble will.\n\nIt gives when none is given\nand lives on when all is lost.\nIt waits in patience as long as it must \nand stays even if there’s a cost.\n\nIt judges not by eyes or ears \nand has no need to boast.\nIt deeply looks into the soul\nand gives comfort to most.\n\nI hear the song of love, \nits rhythm and its rhyme.\nIt is sweet to those who know it\nand stands the test of time.
1049444
its a beautiful poem\n10/10\nyou have a talent my darling\npursue it!\n\n\nStay Hungry, Stay Foolish
372729
i LOVE it!!! what do u think of this poem?\n\nI've never felt this way before\nit's all brand new to me\nmy head is spinning, I cant breathe\nYou are all I see.\n\ni long for you to notice me\nI wish you'd ask me out\nso this is what first love is like,\nAnd what a crush is all about.
660516
A real eye opener that chills you right to the bone. A harsh reminder why those sickos need to be stopped.\nIF this poem is regarding your own life then please seek help. Don't be afraid to tell someone, a teacher, a doctor, even a trusted aunt or other relative. They WILL take you seriously and something WILL be done. Telling someone and making it stop is surely better than continuing life as you are now.
802222
Honestly?  I think the poem is too gushy.  If you'd been dating for a while, it'd be great -- but from an anonymous person, the parts about "you're irreplaceable to me" and "my heart will never stop beating  . . ."  are a little creepy.\nI would change it to:\n\nWhen I think of the perfect girl,\nYou come instantly to mind\n\nWith the intellect of a genius,\nEyes that sparkle like gems,\nHair as soft as silk,\nAn angelic voice that sings beautiful melodies to my ears,\nCheeks as adorable and round,\nAnd a smile that lights up even the darkest room\nIt's obvious you are God's work of art\n\nYou're an amazing girl, an amazing person\nSo special to me\nAnd my heart beats gladly\nFor it lives off these feelings I have for you\n\nGood luck!
488692
In all honesty it is such a lovely poem but once u get to the additional info @ 2 minutes, it is a little bit too full on. I personally am a very romantic sensitive person who also writes stuff, but it goes too deep even for someone like me at that point. Despite this if a guy wrote me that poem i would go totally mushy anyway!
598333
deeply\nwent through this in my 1st marriage\nthe daughter was 8\nfor many years she felt abandoned\nin spite of the fact I tried to keep in touch\neven taking her places from time to time on weekends\nbut it did not help that when she missed my call\nmy wife never told her I called\nthen after a long dry spell\nshe would tell the kid that I did not love her\nit did not help too much when later on the mother confesses\nto go or stay is a big decision\nmy marriage was not all bad every year\nbut mostly for 20 years we did not get along\ntowards the end I was moving out about every 6 months\nthe strain became more than I was willing to take\nwould the kids have been better off if I had stayed\nwho knows\nthe climate was not too good\nbut leaving maybe only brought me some peace?\nb-4 she died we became friends again\n& both cryed when she knew she was soon to die from cancer\nin the mean time I was invited to all family functions & never missed a one\nbut it took a long time for the kids to forgive me
41410
This poem is really a good poem... Yes it is a good peom... The meaning is not deep but when you want a deeper meeanig then put the words into your life then you will understand the real meaning of the peom\n\nDesiderata \n\nGo placidly amid the noise and haste,\nand remember what peace there may be in silence.\nAs far as possible without surrender\nbe on good terms with all persons.\nSpeak your truth quietly and clearly;\nand listen to others,\neven the dull and the ignorant;\nthey too have their story. \n\nAvoid loud and aggressive persons,\nthey are vexations to the spirit.\nIf you compare yourself with others,\nyou may become vain and bitter;\nfor always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.\nEnjoy your achievements as well as your plans. \n\n\nKeep interested in your own career, however humble;\nit is a real possession in the changing fortunes of time.\nExercise caution in your business affairs;\nfor the world is full of trickery.\nBut let this not blind you to what virtue there is;\nmany persons strive for high ideals;\nand everywhere life is full of heroism. \n\n\nBe yourself.\nEspecially, do not feign affection.\nNeither be cynical about love;\nfor in the face of all aridity and disenchantment\nit is as perennial as the grass. \n\n\nTake kindly the counsel of the years,\ngracefully surrendering the things of youth.\nNurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune.\nBut do not distress yourself with dark imaginings.\nMany fears are born of fatigue and loneliness.\nBeyond a wholesome discipline,\nbe gentle with yourself. \n\n\nYou are a child of the universe,\nno less than the trees and the stars;\nyou have a right to be here.\nAnd whether or not it is clear to you,\nno doubt the universe is unfolding as it should. \n\n\nTherefore be at peace with God,\nwhatever you conceive Him to be,\nand whatever your labors and aspirations,\nin the noisy confusion of life keep peace with your soul. \n\n\nWith all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams,\nit is still a beautiful world.\nBe cheerful.\nStrive to be happy. \n\n\nMax Ehrmann, Desiderata, Copyright 1952
501179
I actually think this is a good poem, did you actually make this up?, if yes good job!
1070869
Welllll...I belong to a poetry workshop online, and if I reviewed your poem, I might say something like this: Your poem is filled with obvious pain and honest emotion, however I feel in some places your creativity is compromised by the rhymes...by which I mean you are stretching to achieve rhyme in places, using things that otherwise might not fit the best, like "hardware in his ears" and watching him like a "bear". The repetition of bloodstain and drip are a bit much. The image of red blood on your white shirt is good-you should play that up a bit maybe. Poetry is hard work-keep writing and good luck! And please don't cut yourself over a guy, or anything else, btw. I hope that part is just poetic license. :)
547373
Good use of symbols. I like how line 2 fits with the last two lines, it brings unity to the poem. Towards the end I think I got a little bit of a glimpse of what the poem might be about, but ultimately I feel like the message is hidden from me. It seems the third- and fourth-to-last lines are the culmination of the poem; is it possible to reword some of the earlier lines so as the reader can share what you're feeling when they reach the end?\n\nRegarding parenthesis: as long as you know what they mean then they're fine.