which one of my poems do u thnk is better?Why?
544607
i think you should put one that has your personal experience none of them sound sincere
501179
I actually think this is a good poem, did you actually make this up?, if yes good job!
603073
sorry, i searched poetry sites,quotation sites, by author,firstlines,subject. best i can think of is contact nearest university library or professor of lit. wish you luck, it sounds like a really heartfelt poem. sure wish i knew it.
452241
AWESOME WORK.I AM A POET MYSELF AND I BEEN WRITING A LONG TIME AND I CAN SAY THAT YOUR POEM WAS SPECIAL.YOU ARE TALENTED YOU SHOULD SUBMIT SOME OF YOUR WORK ON POETRY SITES.ALL OF MY WORK IS AT LOVELANDIA UNDER THE NAME VALKATVAL.GO CHECK IT OUT AND START YOUR OWN PAGE,ITS A GREAT SITE,YOU'LL LOVE IT.
618726
what type of poetry.. random ravings or serious scenarios
256589
What is that poem you'll maybe have better answer if you post your answer in litterature
776584
aha,lol.good one.i guess your mom will love the poem,go for it!
410426
The best poem is one you would write yourself. If you need help just contact me through my e-mail on my Q&A page. Here is a poem for you.\n\nIf I Never\n\nIf my days were untroubled\nAnd my heart always light\nWould I seek that fair land\nWhere there is no night?\n\nIf I never grew weary\nWith the weight of my load\nWould I search for God’s Peace\nAt the end of the road?\n\nIf I never knew sickness\nAnd never felt pain\nWould I reach for a hand\nTo help and sustain?\n\nIf I walked not with sorrow \nAnd lived without loss\nWould my soul seek sweet solace\nAt the foot of the cross?\n\nIf all I desired was mine\nDay by Day\nWould I kneel before God\nAnd earnestly pray?\n\n\n\nIf God sent no “Winter”\nTo freeze me with fear\nWould I yearn for the warmth\nOf “Spring” every year?\n\nI ask myself this . . .\nAnd the answer is plain\nIf my life were all pleasure\nAnd I never knew pain.\n\nI’d seek God less often\nAnd need him much less\nFor God’s sought more often \nIn times of distress\n\nAnd no one knows God\nOr sees him as plain\nAs those who have met Him\nOn the Pathway of Pain
807283
It's interesting, as a poem I would have stopped at struggle to change as a song its fine to continue, Some grammatical and punctuation errors, I would accept it as a work in progress. :-) good luck and keep writing
722143
A narrative poem?  Or an epic poem?
402976
the mood is one of satisfaction. the writer is saying that when you have a fence dividing you, it does not "divide" but it prevents.the tone, i guess would be the same. Why exactly are you reading this poem? i had to for a school project.
286868
"A bond never broken" sounds better for a poem.  If it was an essay, unbreakable bond is okay.....)(
980984
nice poem is it a haiku
924346
How can you kill someone if they tell you to do your own homework? And you did the poem yourself, you didn't ask someone to do it for you.\n\nBut, yeah, the poem sounds great. Personally, I wouldn't change anything since poems are more artistic than being grammatically correct. If you feel that you got your artistic point across, then you don't need to change it.
231805
the poem is very good!!!
134236
That poem rocks.  I know that it is controversial.  I would be interested to see what people thought of a choice line or two from the poem.
590020
Kinda long, but great and has a great message. Usually if a poem is this long I go to a differnt one, but this keep the reader's attention. did u write this poem? You have real talent. Good Job!