Any suggestions to improve www.metallian.com?
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What about links to music sample?
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I took a look at your site and here are my comments:\n\n1. You can improve your search engine ranking (and getting found by people through the SEs) by adding a title tag to your website. Right now, it only says "Home". I'm not familiar with Yahoo Sitebuilder, but you need to change this:\n\n <head><title>Home</title> to\n\n <head><title>ABC Office Supply: Office Supplies, Computer Supplies and Other Business Needs</title>\n\nPut the keywords in your title. It's not a guarantee, but it can significantly improve your chances.\n\n2. Improve the aesthetics of the site. The dark blue is too overpowering. Limit the underlined text to those that are clickable (on the Web, when it is underlined, people think it can be clicked).\n\n3. Put featured products on your site. Also highlight discounts or ongoing promotions\n\n4. Market your site well. Try pay per click. Make deals with some offices to buy from you and not from the bigger stores. Give people a reason why they will come to you, and not to another store
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I like the color scheme of the site.   The format is very nice and clean.  I like they frames and layout when I click on the various links.  Overall job well done.  I really like your heading!! :)  \n\nI did find a few things that, if I were the designer, I would change:  The "Did you know column" light violet font may be hard for some people to read, blends in too much with the backround.  Also you have several links on the bottom of the page (photo gallery, advice column, etc.) that you have already included in the left-side frame.  I would remove the ones at the bottom.  The green flower buttons move and are cute, but the page may seem "too busy" to your audience- definitely remove the double-posted links. \n\nGood luck! :)
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Nice web design. Just a few comments:\n\n1) I would remove the illustrations/wallpapers because they seem a bit weak.\n\n2) Your layout is yellow. This is not a common color for professional websites.\n\n3) Your web statistics is provided by a 3rd party. There is a lack of transition between the two websites.\n\n4) Alienware.com . Don't try to pull off any crazy stunts. The guy who did that for a dell-look-alike landed in some major lawsuits.
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The first bit of advice I'll give you is to create a *much* simplified version of your site. Very few people are going to spend more than a few moments at your site when every single link leads to a 5-second flash animation. I got tired of waiting *very* quickly and I imagine other people will as well.
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Daryl :), I give it 9.\n\nI think the site is well balanced and well structured. It downloads at an acceptable speed on a busy 56k connection.\n\nOverall I would have given it a 10 if it were not for two things.\nYou loose 0.5 for the featured pet. It is dark text on a dark background. On a slightly dark monitor the text is unreadable. change  the text to a lighter colour if you can. I think maybe that part is being serverd by a different website, so changing it may be difficult. Okay i see it looks better in IE but the links are still slightly blured because it's blue on a blue background. The problem with the other dark text is most likely to do with the way FIREFOX interprets your style sheets. IN my experience firfoex does a good job with style sheets i write bu then they don't work prperly in IE. it's very irritationg for me because i am new to style sheets.\n\nThe other 0.5 point you loose for the reservation page. Using firefox i get an error saying my "the current browser is either too old or too modern (usind DOM document structure)" and then a date picker is way off at the bottem of the page. I would have taken 1 point but i see it works in IE6 which is means it will display correctly on more than 80% of the worlds computers.\n\n I also like the fact that it's not rotten with images. The colour scheme is very consistent and doesn't change from page to page. There are no popups or flash content which i also like about it. \n\nThe last but no least you have provided alternate contact details not just a webform. People who don't like to uise the web forms can contact you by phone or email.\n\nWorthy of mention is that all the links worked, there is no iritating background sound or moving text or flashy banners. Navigation is also a breeze, not confusing like some other pages.
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Build your inbound links.\nMost of the directories online charge a one time fee to review your site and add it to their index.  Here are three of my favorites:\nhttp://www.avivadirectory.com/cgi-bin/affiliates/clickthru.cgi?id=kahmer\nhttp://www.kahmer.com\nhttp://www.joeant.com\nAlso work on meta tags and header tags.
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More content would be helpful - and an easier way to browse the content. The font in the logo looks a little tacky compared to the rest of the masthead. It is an interesting idea - the site itself - getting the ball rolling on the stories is probably going to be your biggest challenge.\n\nPerhaps linking from the games that people are betting on to their boxscores would be a good way to add some realism to the stories too.
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very well done..just a few suggestions\n\n1) in the game page align the game list..its not proper\n2) I noticed there are no links to the the other pages from the subpages..(ie from the game page,poll page etc to the other pages like your guestbook,video pages,home page...)..it would be good to have them\n3) In the game page dont use a green color for text on a blue background..its difficult to read..\n4) Maybe you can just make the backgrounds a bit more colorful since this is mainly a entertainment website...\n\notherwise its pretty good..well done..
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good! but the very first thing that caught my attention is the main menu at the left. its design makes the whole page weak. it's one of the most important part of a website i think so it must be something attractive or embossed. I'm not an artist or a website maker but i know i have a good taste. just hope I've helped
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4)Skin matches well, but i would move shout box lower and/or make forums more obvious.\n\nAlso move to free host (and not invisonboard).
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it looks like a nice site, i just went to see what it was about so im not an active member, you have a preatty decent crowd 8145 people online??? i wish my site had half .. lol
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I was suprised because i thought you company was very unprofessional because of the blog site but i found a link the the real site which is terrefic and extemely proffesional! I think you should put a huge company logo on the page and give it a hyperlink to your good site. The blog site is just a huge turnoff but if you just have a link to your site people will go to the site. \n\nId just like to say i absolutley love your site its very attractive with tons of languages. Id just ditch the blog spot site\n\nhttp://www.google.com/webmasters/add.html    this is a form to add your site to the google search my opionion when it asks for the test if would just put LEARN ENGLISH because if someone wanted to learn english thats what they would probably put into google. If you want put it on yahoo and other seach engines as well.\n\nEtan
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Wow that's a good site. Direct to the point, clean design, clean graphics. The only thing I think you could adjust is in your meta tags. \n\nOther than that it's great.
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Okay, let me defend myself:\n\nI ACTUALLY want to know how to make my site better. I've asked many programming friends that I personally know and they've given me lots of tips, and I just want to ask others to see what they think.\n\nTHE ADS ARE NOT FROM ME. I don't like ads, I HATE em. But it's webhosting policy, they put it on automatically. I have no control over it.\n\nDO NOT click on the ads. If it pops up, just hit refresh and it'll go away, or just close it.\n\nThank you.
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the site sucks...\nthe links at the top are too close together and not noticable as links.\nthe links at the bottom are way too cluttered\nit is using tables! and they aren't even needed or justified for such a basic site.\nnothing is capitilized\nit looks more like a bad pop-up ad but bigger.\nthe code is sloppy - did i mention the tables thing? cause it needs to be said at least twice...\nits just not a very good page, and doesn't make me want to click on anything...
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Before you advertise, I'd recommend redesigning the page, and adding links to products so people visiting the site will actually have something to order.  Most important, lose that background!