He wants to become a doctro his family insists that he study law.  What is wrong with this sentence?
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It's a run-on sentence and "doctor" is misspelled.
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I had to re-read it a few times. -_-\nIt's his son. \nBecause if the person is his Dad's son,\nand he has no siblings,\nwho else could it be? D:\n♥
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1st one: That is one of the most unintelligent quotes I have ever heard. Who ever would do that is purely ill.\n\n2nd one: I could live with that we will fight but do not expect me to go down easy.
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Your sentence is good as it is.  The only word I would question is "also".  (I'm guilty of over-using it also!!)  I would remove it if it isn't necessary to the meaning of the sentence.  Best of luck.
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This is fine as it is. The few grammatical mistakes that there are just aren't worth correcting.\nGood job, and good luck on your speech!
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The 2nd sentence is correct and very formal; there is something like an old subjunctive form hidden in it.\nThe 1st sentence is (informally) not incorrect and could be found in British English.
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Sentence number 2 is correct.\n\nThe reason sentence 1 is not correct is because it has a dangling participle. In other words, the participle cannot distinguish what it wants to describe. \n\nIt could be that you realize how much different you have been than before (like in sentence 2)\nOR------\nit could be that you realize how FREQUENTLY you have been different than before.\n\nIf you read sentence 1, you will realize that both senerios could be true. \n\nHope this helps\nThanks\nJon
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Do you prefer it grammatically correct to the last detail??? I can't edit it right now. My head's really aching but here's some criticism:\n\n1) lots of fragments... like \n\n\n"And in this way you create an environment that everybody can't easily spoil with their Farsi witticism."\n\n"Second, bring up various and brand new subjects."\n\n""While I was already a member."\n\n2) She (is she a girl or a boy?)used transistional devices such as FIRST, SECOND, but no FINALLY or LASTLY\n\n3) "By the way, I tried writing something in the club and it just wouldn't permit it."\n\nIN REFERRING TO THE CLUB AS AN ACTION DOER, SHE SHOULD HAVE USED "THEY"\n\n"By the way, I tried writing something in the club and they just wouldn't permit it."\n\n4) wrong use of clauses\n\n\ncan't think anymore.my head's killing me...need to take some pills..\n\n\n\ngenerally, I think when she was writing this letter, it took her a very long time before actually finishing it...hmmmm.....
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Johnnie doesn't want to learn.\n\nJohnnie already thinks he knows it all.\n\nJohnnie is spoiled rotten like his parents.\n\nJohnnie has parents who blame teachers.\n\nJohnnie thinks the world owes him something.
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Would suggests the occurrence for needing the laptop has not happened yet. What ever the project being discussed is, it is still in the planning stages. Will indicates a decision being made.\n\nBTW: poor grammar. HOWEVER should not be used to start a sentence, and is unnecessary in the above statement. Better written could be "I would always use my laptop, however; because it is more flexible and provides better functionality."
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Rafael don't f**k with me.\nSecond sentence should be "tu" instead of "mi".  Which would actually be colloquially Tu Madre.....them's fighting words.
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Or maybe he wants to say that he is very confused, so he can't do at the moment what you have asked him for.\nOr...\nsorry, I do not cope very well with the interpretation of phrases in english, oh, believe me, it's a messed up situation!\n\nHope you appreciate the humor!\n\nKaterina
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The sentence "I watched figure skating yesterday." is just fine.  Well, done.  Don't listen to all the other people that want you to change it to make it all complicated and serious sounding, they're just trying to sound intelligent.  There's absolutely nothing wrong with writing simple sentences when you're just learning a language.\nWhat is you first language anyway?  You seem to know English pretty well so far.
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Hippocratic Oath\n\nI swear to fulfill, to the best of my ability and judgment, this covenant:\n\nI will respect the hard-won scientific gains of those physicians in whose steps I walk, and gladly share such knowledge as is mine with those who are to follow.\n\nI will apply, for the benefit of the sick, all measures [that] are required, avoiding those twin traps of overtreatment and therapeutic nihilism.\n\nI will remember that there is art to medicine as well as science, and that warmth, sympathy, and understanding may outweigh the surgeon's knife or the chemist's drug.\n\nI will not be ashamed to say "I know not," nor will I fail to call in my colleagues when the skills of another are needed for a patient's recovery.\n\nI will respect the privacy of my patients, for their problems are not disclosed to me that the world may know. Most especially must I tread with care in matters of life and death. If it is given me to save a life, all thanks. But it may also be within my power to take a life; this awesome responsibility must be faced with great humbleness and awareness of my own frailty. Above all, I must not play at God.\n\nI will remember that I do not treat a fever chart, a cancerous growth, but a sick human being, whose illness may affect the person's family and economic stability. My responsibility includes these related problems, if I am to care adequately for the sick.\n\nI will prevent disease whenever I can, for prevention is preferable to cure.\n\nI will remember that I remain a member of society, with special obligations to all my fellow human beings, those sound of mind and body as well as the infirm.\n\nIf I do not violate this oath, may I enjoy life and art, respected while I live and remembered with affection thereafter. May I always act so as to preserve the finest traditions of my calling and may I long experience the joy of healing those who seek my help.\n\nWhat is your point ?This is called the modern version .\nhttp://www.pbs.org/wgbh/nova/doctors/oath_classical.html\nThe link is to the classical one
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“There can be hope only for a society which acts as one big family, not as many separate ones.” like arab countries \nsee i hope will be as a big family, but i do not think it will happen\n\nwe still trying and hopeing
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There are few gramatical errors --> "I know should never think of only myself" instead use something like " I know I shouldn't  think of only myself " or " I know I should think about others too." There is something missing in the essay. I am not sure what though. I think you need to use more "diffucult" words rather than simple ones. I really love your starting and your ending but the middle needs a little perfection. Right now your essay according to me is 7/10 which is great. But using more "difficult" words yet understandable would really make your essay stand out. I think you should also add why you can't be what you want to be and what's that proffesion that you want to be. Avoid using words such as "cool", they bring the quality of your essay down. And being nurse doesn't mean you don't have problems. Infact, nurses can get in lots of problems, such as people can sue you for stupid stuff. I volunteered in a hospital last summer and they wouldn't let us touch patients AT ALL. We had to call professionals because they could sue us saying that while helping them we caused a bruise or whatever and now they are in terrible pain and blah blah blah but back to your essay. "I’m a teenager; I should enjoy life and have fun. Isn’t I’m being too stubborn, too selfish to think like that?" make this statement more clear im not sure if i am understanding what you are saying but i get the idea.  "I know that it’s my responsibility not to take my studies for granted." It's not your responsibility. You are making it sound like studies is a job or something. Not exactly what your teachers want to hear. Use more like "I know that studies should not be taken for granted" or maybe " my studies are important and serious to me". "because if it wasn’t for them I won’t be able to grow like this." use "because if it wasn’t for them I would not have been the person i am today."  " I should be greatful to have a family who cares and love me." make it sound you are grateful so use "I am grateful to have a family who cares and loves me."
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The first sentence is incorrect because "is" is a singular, and you refer to yourself and your family, which is a plural.  You would need to use the plural "are" to make the sentence correct.  \n\nYou could also write it as "My family is very thankful to you for understanding our hardships" because in that case you are using "My family" as a singular unit.  In this second case, the "I" is understood as being included in "My family" and doesn't need to be mentioned separately.\n\nIt is common practice in English for the speaker to include themselves second in such a sentence.  So, another alternative would be "My family and I are very thankful to you for understanding our hardships."