I wrote a song about my question "Wil you please read this"  tell me what you think!!?
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Very good. I personally would use another word for "tear" in the line "The smoke stings my eyes, and makes me tear" because it just sounds too convenient. I would use "aware." Other than that, I would never have guessed you were 12 when you wrote this. Do you have music for it?
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If you are looking to also put music to lyrics, I can help! I've written 16 albums ranging from prog rock, to pop rock, to hip-hop and R&B. Go to my profile thingy on Y!A and e-mail me if yer still interested in it and I'll get back to ya.... I'm not at all comfortable with handing out my e-mail address.
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This may give you some insight...\nhttp://www.songfacts.com/detail.php?id=1199
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i love it, i'd suggest some sort of steel-drum thing, tho i dont know any names of songs, sorry!
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There is always a place for something new! If you came out with a CD i'd buy it! I'm always into something new! I love country and Rock, Your style (evenescense) I really like that kind of stuff! Not so much Rap it gives me a headache sometimes! If you've come out with a demo tape that is pretty cool but if you feel your good and you get good reviews then go for it! Try it! Nothing says that you can't try! You tried to make a band and you have one now don't you? Good Luck and hope you make it! I'll be sure to get your CD =) Just fill me in when it comes out if I don't see your music videos lol =)
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Awesome poem! I like the way it flows, and how you put feeling into the poem. Kick-A**-Tic. Let me know if you write any more. ROCK ON!!
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I really hate myself for loving this song. I cannot explain it. It even made it to my mixCD. I think I lose cool points cuz of it.
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hehe :) sweet. i could find out for ya...but i think it would be alot cooler if you wrote one yourself. creativity, ya know? :]
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Yeah, that's a pretty great song..I have it on my ipod..send me your email and I'll send it to you
727889
Who wants to hear that gay song!
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wow!\n\nthat sounds amazing\n\ni cant wait to hear more!
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lol.. ur good lookin theres, a point for you.\nthe background could be a little better... \nthe song is one of my favorites.\nthats is a A grade myspace\n\nps. check mine out: www.myspace.com/sonicyouthlover
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Title: Artist: LESS THAN JAKE Song: Motown Never Sounded So Good Album: ANTHEM\nID: 45343\nDate and time (posted): 2004-08-02 13:26:47\nTo comment on this (Or read other comments), Please scroll down  \nMotown Never Sounded So Good lyrics\n\n\n[Roger:] \nSo you say, all your white flags are up and that you've had enough and that you were tired of collecting dust, you say everything always looks the same and you made your brand new face to match your brand new place, you say all your distress calls have gone out and your ship is going down \n\n[Pre-chorus] \n[Chris:] \nWell I say it to myself all the time, \n"Stop living half and a life and stop feeling like I'm half alive." \n\n[Chorus] \n[Roger:] \nI can't get enough, I'm not satisfied, I've wasted my time with this daily grind, in single file line, is this real life, I've been telling myself sometimes, what matters is on the inside. \n\n[Roger:] \nDo you remember when we had all the answers, and can you really remember when we wished for anything better, just to feel like it's been forever, does it feel like a broken record, a head full of yesterdays, you keep wishing your life away, you can't keep looking over you own shoulder, things'll never look up unless you start to move forward. \n\n[Pre-chorus] \n\n[Chorus] \n\n[Chorus 2] \n[Roger:] \nI can't get enough, I'm not satisfied, I've wasted my time with this daily grind, I can't get enough, I'm just getting by, I can't stand this design for our bitter lives, I keep feeling lost and I'm not satisfied with traffic and turnpikes and these tired eyes \n\n[Chorus]
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Keep up the good work. I like the newest song. The hazardous song is not for you. Good Luck
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Hi Avivagirl88. Seen your post, and am now curious. Any idea of any of the words in the song? You might be able to string it in a search engine, and automatically find the lyrics
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can you not simply listen to the song for this answer?
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It would be interesting to also hear the melody.  I have a melody in my head for this.  Your lyrics are good. pretty good.\nThe song seems to be about a kind of bad boy that you are hooked on.