i write a silly poem, please read it!?
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It's a pretty poem :D keep writting them, you are good.
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you seem like a good writer although I'm not the one to critique you....my speciality is poetry-free verse form.  good luck.
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try making it funny with a silly and funny Christmas poems.\nhere is a good site... http://www.funnypoets.com/poems_category/christmas.htm\n\nhope this helps
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well, if u wrote it, CONGRAGULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, if not i think this is just a ordinary poem, probably written to impress a lady or something. I have a friend who published poems, and this poem would be an B- or 7.5/10 grade, which would not make it to the poem industry. But as I said, this poem has a lot of rich text that is exceptionally enriching. It takes great skill to write that, and that is why we are not all writers.
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WOW talk about silly! How old are you?
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Oh Yes ! Fully agreed ! My mind needs a Dry Cleaning or needs to be sent to Laundry !! It has become very dirty....especially after reading your poetry , except for the last stanza !!! You call it a Naughty ? I must say it was an erotic One !!!  Ha Ha Ha ....Nice one....Quite imaginative ! I liked it !
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The world needs more Poets.\n\nI agree grammar is important..unless misuse is deliberate.\n\nI did get a laugh over someone chastising you for poor \n\ngrammar by stating one word was "more correct"!!!\n\nCheck my poems on my Yahoo 360 and let me know what you \n\nthink by posting a comment and voting for favourites.\n\nA 360 site would be a good way for you to post your works \n\nas well.\n\n\nGood Luck\n\nJimmy
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damm u shud make a poem or a rap out of that
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This is not an answer this is a poem I received please enjoy ( I am a very pale milky colour by the way lol)\n\nThis was written by an African American in Texas and is so funny. What a great sense of humour and creativity!!!\n\n\n\nWhen I born, I black,\n\nWhen I grow up, I black,\n\nWhen I go in sun, I black, \n\nWhen I cold, I black,\n\nWhen I scared, I black, \n\nWhen I sick, I black, \n\nAnd when I die, I still black.\n\n\nYou white folks....\n\n\nWhen you born, you pink,\n\nWhen you grow up, you white,\n\nWhen you go in sun, you red,\n\nWhen you cold, you blue,\n\nWhen you scared, you yellow,\n\nWhen you sick, you green,\n\nWhen you bruised, you purple,\n\nAnd when you die, you grey.\n\n\nSo who you callin' coloured folks???
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been nowhere, did nothing, stole the t shirt.\ncome to the dark side, we have cookies.\nback with a vengence... and a mug of cocoa.\nsaw it, wanted it, threw a tantrum, got it.\na pat on the back is only a few centimetres from a kick up the backside.\nof course i dont look busy, i did it right the first time.\nalways remember that you're unique, yust like everyone else.\ni started out with nothing and still have most of it left.\nDo unto others…then run.\nYes I missed you. But my aim is improving.\nSupport your local medical examiner - die strangely.\nThe main reason Santa is jolly is that he knows where all the bad girls live.\nLife’s a beach, and then you drown.\nLife in a vacuum sucks.\nGot kleptomania? Take something for it.\nRomans didn’t find algebra challenging because X was always 10.\nLife’s short and hard - kind of like a bodybuilding elf.\nTwo wrongs don’t  make a right, but three lefts do.\nI’m not afraid of the dark…it’s the stuff in the dark I’m afraid of.\nEven if the voices aren’t real, they come up with some good ideas.\nRock is dead…long live paper and scissors!
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nothing rhymes with orange\nsaid the sign beside my door hinge\n=)\n\nwords that don't rhyme: purple, pint, nothing, month\n\nI'm not in the mood to go hunting after the poem right now LOL let's see if someone else want it =)
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Well... this is more of a lust poem, but he may like it. A woman once gave it to me, and I was flying for days!\n\nO Blush Not So! \nby John Keats \n\nO blush not so! O blush not so! \nOr I shall think you knowing; \nAnd if you smile the blushing while, \nThen maidenheads are going. \n\nThere's a blush for want, and a blush for shan't, \nAnd a blush for having done it; \nThere's a blush for thought, and a blush for nought, \nAnd a blush for just begun it. \n\nO sigh not so! O sigh not so! \nFor it sounds of Eve's sweet pippin; \nBy these loosen'd lips you have tasted the pips \nAnd fought in an amorous nipping. \n\nWill you play once more at nice-cut-core, \nFor it only will last our youth out, \nAnd we have the prime of the kissing time, \nWe have not one sweet tooth out. \n\nThere's a sigh for aye, and a sigh for nay, \nAnd a sigh for "I can't bear it!" \nO what can be done, shall we stay or run? \nO cut the sweet apple and share it!
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Hi, I'm a Poetry, and I'm a yahoo answerer!!!
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hehe :) sweet. i could find out for ya...but i think it would be alot cooler if you wrote one yourself. creativity, ya know? :]
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nice poem is it a haiku
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SURE-they're your poems.\ndon't restrict yourself with certain guidelines..\nGOOD LUCK WITH THE BOOK!!i write too!
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Sure, but you're question is a bit vague. What, specifically, do you want to know? I can type out the entire poem for you, if that's what you need.