neonatology personal statement?
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I think the operative word is "personal."  No one can put words to your thoughts.  Make a list of the reasons you are attracted to neonatology, make a list of the things you are good at and demonstrate why you would be a good candidate for this important job.  This statement will relect how well you know the job, so if you are shakey about that aspect, volunteer at your local hospital to observe first hand what happens in that unit.\n\nAfter all of that, if you still have a difficult time putting words to your thoughts, perhaps this is not the right field for you.  It is a no-nonsense unit with critical (tiny) patients who require some of the sharpest cookies in the hospital.  If you can't verbalize your interest, I would question if there is anything there other than an emotion...and that doesn't cut it.  \n\nGood luck.
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Well I don't know whether its the same for you, since I'm guessing you are American, and I'm English... but when I had to write a personal statement last year for University It included 4 areas: \n\nWhy I wanted to study the subject (which bits most interested me, what i most enjoyed)\n\nMy past experience and therefore why it was a suitable course (relevant school trips, work experience)\n\nFuture career plans (is this a wide course so that you can specialise later, or specific because you have made your mind up firmly?)\n\nNon-academic details, ie. community activities, school contributions, hobbies, achievements and special responsibilities (carer, prefect, head of house etc.)\n\nIts really about showing that you are dedicated, really passionate about the subject (in my case Biology, I looooove it), and that you are hard working, but will be willing to take part in the wider community of the institution. \nHope I helped, and good luck! Mine worked a treat, no rejections woo!
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It has been a long time since working out of an office, but, in Family Practice, its always good to post information about childhood diseases and vaccinations, as well as information for the older bunch.\n\nMake a trip to an associates office and make some notes.  Don't go overboard out of the starting blocks, cause the drug reps will have all kinds of posters and such, that always looks good in the exam rooms.
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I can't offer you any examples (that would be a violation of policy and ethics), but I can tell you what you should include.\n\nWho am I (education, experience, awards, skills, distinctions, etc.)?\nWhy am I interested in this field of study?\nWhy am I particularly qualified for graduate study in this area? How have I prepared for study in this field?\nWhy am I interested in this particular program?\nWhat is my potential specific area of interest? Why?\nWhat are my interests or influences in terms of theory?\nWhat are my long-term goals?\n\nAnd for goodness sake, PROOFREAD for grammar and spelling errors!\n\nIf there are any blemishes on your undergraduate transcript, or gaps in your preparation, explain them.\n\nAlso, it's always a good practice to show familiarity with current literature in the field, *especially* if you are not submitting a current writing sample.\n\nOne other piece of advice: Tailor each statement of intent for each program. Speak with your current professors before you apply, and ask about the strengths of various programs. You should already know which scholars are of greatest interest to you as mentors, but it is always wise to ask current professors if they know these scholars. (You may learn that Professor XX, while brilliant, is a lousy mentor for grad students.)
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tell her 2 make lists!!! i was so stressed out last wk. had to finish my personal statement, start revision for january modules,  do normal work for my courses and still be awake and alert for work at the weekends.\n\nJust make alot of lists - what you want to accomplish, when, break down large topics. With the personal statement BRAINSTORM!!! The first sentence is usually the hardest to think of. Try a quote maybe. But dont start with 'I' or 'My' eg, 'I would like to study.....' as it just sounds blah!!\nWish her gd luck frm me!!
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good luck: http://www.emc.maricopa.edu/faculty/farabee/BIOBK/BioBookPLANTANAT.html
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Hey\n\ni think this one is the best:\nhttp://www.statementofpurpose.com/\n\nHope it helps.\n\nHeres something else from the website:\nhttp://www.accepted.com/grad/personalstatement.aspx\n\nTen Do's and Don'ts for Your Statement of Purpose\n\nThe Do's\nUnite your essay and give it direction with a theme or thesis. The thesis is the main point you want to communicate. \nBefore you begin writing, choose what you want to discuss and the order in which you want to discuss it. \nUse concrete examples from your life experience to support your thesis and distinguish yourself from other applicants. \nWrite about what interests you, excites you. That's what the admissions staff wants to read. \nStart your essay with an attention-grabbing lead -- an anecdote, quote, question, or engaging description of a scene. \nEnd your essay with a conclusion that refers back to the lead and restates your thesis. \nRevise your essay at least three times. \nIn addition to your editing, ask someone else to critique your statement of purpose for you. \nProofread your personal statement by reading it out loud or reading it into a tape recorder and playing back the tape. \nWrite clearly, succinctly. \n\nThe Don'ts\nDon't include information that doesn't support your thesis. \nDon't start your essay with "I was born in...," or "My parents came from..." \nDon't write an autobiography, itinerary, or résumé in prose. \nDon't try to be a clown (but gentle humor is OK). \nDon't be afraid to start over if the essay just isn't working or doesn't answer the essay question. \nDon't try to impress your reader with your vocabulary. \nDon't rely exclusively on your computer to check your spelling. \nDon't provide a collection of generic statements and platitudes. \nDon't give mealy-mouthed, weak excuses for your GPA or test scores. \nDon't make things up.
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BIODATA:-\nNAME:-FREDDY\nAGE:-18\nJOB:-STUDENT(FINISHED K-12 AND AWAITING RESULTS)\nNOW:-WHILING AWAY MY TIME.\nSEEKING ANY JOB I COULD DO.(TO PASS TIME)\nIS THAT ENOUGH.........\nI SPENT MY VALUABLE TIME TO GET 10 PTS.\nSO DO IT
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Here ya go!  Good luck!\n\nhttp://www.emc.maricopa.edu/faculty/farabee/biobk/BioBookPLANTANAT.html
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neonatal\nprenatal\npostnatal
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Well I would put the infor for the first date of graduation first.  skip a couple of lines and then put the other date next.\nIf you want to personalize it for each son put some kind of clip art that describes each son next to their info.
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Ceasarian Section in birth and delivery.\nComputer Science in education.\n\n:-)
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usually you'd get you thesis statement from a book or something. like a critcs review on your person saying how their work is related to their life or if its not a person just do something general like 'how you can stop _____' or 'how ____ effects everyday living'.
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http://career.berkeley.edu/Grad/GradStatement.stm\nhttp://www.cs.rpi.edu/~whuang/other/purposeadvice.html\nhttp://www.statementofpurpose.com/ \n\nThese are some of the sites that I am using right now for hints and advice to write an effective statement of purpose. I have a couple of things to say about your SOP. Don't write very big sentences. And you also have a few grammatical mistakes, \n\nFor example, instead of\n\nAs I have been brought up in a family which has strong inclinations towards development.\n\nI have been brought up in a family that has...\n\nMy father is a K.S (AVOID SHORT FORMS, WRITE WHAT K.S. STANDS FOR) officer WHO works for the development of rural areas.(BREAK SENTENCE) My mother, a teacher and social worker, HAS DEDICATED HER LIFE TO HELPING LESS FORTUNATE CHILDREN.\n\nI am not trying to discourage you - only trying to help. Review these sites, and make changes. Then email me your essay (scorpiodotcom@yahoo.com) as a Microsoft Word attachment. I will give you a detailed critique.
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Just write a summary of all your activities including but not limited to the ICU unit or ER and that should do it, good luck..☺
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Try:\nhttp://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/ency/article/001240.htm
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here is info for both card and birth