I wrote my boyfirend a poem is that romantic?
550123
Totally romantic and you are very talented.
483264
You are a very talented writer, you gave me butterfly's and I'm a girl..and STRAIT! If that guy doesn't fall in love with you over that poem than there's something wrong with him! Beautiful!
1070869
Welllll...I belong to a poetry workshop online, and if I reviewed your poem, I might say something like this: Your poem is filled with obvious pain and honest emotion, however I feel in some places your creativity is compromised by the rhymes...by which I mean you are stretching to achieve rhyme in places, using things that otherwise might not fit the best, like "hardware in his ears" and watching him like a "bear". The repetition of bloodstain and drip are a bit much. The image of red blood on your white shirt is good-you should play that up a bit maybe. Poetry is hard work-keep writing and good luck! And please don't cut yourself over a guy, or anything else, btw. I hope that part is just poetic license. :)
488692
In all honesty it is such a lovely poem but once u get to the additional info @ 2 minutes, it is a little bit too full on. I personally am a very romantic sensitive person who also writes stuff, but it goes too deep even for someone like me at that point. Despite this if a guy wrote me that poem i would go totally mushy anyway!
401359
Your poem gives me a smile. If your poems are as good as this one, i think you should publish more poems. I have heard that Xlibris will publish some quality poems. try to look into their website... in case you are interested.
240391
this is called unrequited love.Write poems
581176
yeah, write another poem =] it sounds like things are going well and theres a really good chance she'll say yes if you ask her out..good luck! =]
775034
tell him what u just wrote
127655
i've been with my boyfriend for 4 and 1/2 month, i plan to give him a poem i made myself and a cool choker
15459
Romance has several different ideaologies behind it ie, Juliet on her balcony or a candle lit dinner with soft music in the background or serenading a girl (with a boom box in my time). It could mean a nice hay ride or horse drawn carriage. Writing poetry specifically for a girl.
382631
If you're decent at writing poems, and if the girl likes poetry, then yes.  Otherwise do what you're comfortable with.  Not every girl likes to get poetry, and not every guy can write poems.\n\nPoetry is not the only way to a girl's heart.  If you can write poems, and think/know she likes that kind of stuff, then go for it!\n\nGood luck!
825760
yes.  it's pretty sweet if you come to think of it.  :D\nbesides, the diary is ALL about you and your boyfriend and what you did.  it's like a time capsule, you know?
153981
I know how you feel , Go ask him. If he says no don't break out crying , move on with your life. There are pleanty suprises coming  ahead. If you don't feel like asking him , write a note to him and add this poem:\n\nI don't think you know what you mean to me . What you mean to me can't be explained.I wake up each morning thinking of you . Your love is my inspiration. I would swim the largest ocean , climb the highest mountain, and weather the strongest storm just to feel your love. I don't think you know but I love you so.
713057
the poem is really touching..i loved it,,i know u are gonna give it to ur best friend who is upset with u for some resons..am i right??all the best,i know u'll definately get the problem solved and ur best friend will come back to u if she really understands ur feelings.
367606
read him a poem that they think is a love poem but turns out to be a dump poem
802222
Honestly?  I think the poem is too gushy.  If you'd been dating for a while, it'd be great -- but from an anonymous person, the parts about "you're irreplaceable to me" and "my heart will never stop beating  . . ."  are a little creepy.\nI would change it to:\n\nWhen I think of the perfect girl,\nYou come instantly to mind\n\nWith the intellect of a genius,\nEyes that sparkle like gems,\nHair as soft as silk,\nAn angelic voice that sings beautiful melodies to my ears,\nCheeks as adorable and round,\nAnd a smile that lights up even the darkest room\nIt's obvious you are God's work of art\n\nYou're an amazing girl, an amazing person\nSo special to me\nAnd my heart beats gladly\nFor it lives off these feelings I have for you\n\nGood luck!
772246
how old are you? dont think a poem will help much, talk with him and then it will be sorted.