how can I change this sentence: am I still incuded for the financial support?
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Do I still get financial support? Keep it simple and straightforward.
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The 2nd sentence is correct and very formal; there is something like an old subjunctive form hidden in it.\nThe 1st sentence is (informally) not incorrect and could be found in British English.
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Either I am blind or your grammar is atrocious.\n\nI recommend that you spend some of that money you are collecting on an English course.
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am deleting my previous answers to your question...i thought translating your phrases and giving the source for your future reference will be some of help.....since it is not appreciated anyway, am deleting and withdrawing my contribution.....
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i tranlated it word by word and i came up with "our kid came trough therapy support. but when i used an online tranlator it says that "Our child is supported by therapies" which i think is wrong. \n\nthis ones right!!\nthey want to know whether u are willing to treat him in the future with any of those therapies...
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keep tring it will work... ur question is to broad wat form are u tring to file need to explaine better for better help
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Provided you've got the money for plane fare, visitng Australia is easy to arrange.\n\nE.\n\nBut it should be stated that the original sentence is a better way of selling your point.
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I will "tweak" a student's application in extreme circumstances, but not often. \n\nHere's how it goes...\n\nYour school can adjust your FAFSA (the application for Federal Student Aid funding) under certain circumstances.  However, they are by no means required to -- it's up to them to decide whether the circumstances you describe qualify as exceptions to the already *very* detailed Federal Student Aid regulations.  Their ability to make exceptions to these rules is known as "Professional Judgment," a provision in the regulations that gives your school the power to adjust or override certain FAFSA data in cases where that data does not accurately reflect your situation.  Examples of exceptional circumstances might include...\n\n* If the income/asset information that was reported on the FAFSA does not accurately reflect your earnings/savings for the year in question.  if a parent lost their job (or a lot of income) in mid-2005, their 2005 tax return (on which the 06-07 FAFSA is based) will make them seem as if they earn more than they really do.  Your school could, in this case, use your parents' new income to estimate actual 2006 earnings and correct your FAFSA.\n\n* If someone in your family incurred a great deal of medical expenses not covered by their insurance, your school could take this into consideration, possibly by adjusting your/their assets or investments to reflect the money that was or will be paid out to cover these costs \n\n* If you are technically considered "dependent" according to the FAFSA guidelines, but you can prove that you are *completely* self-supporting (emphasis on "completely"), your school can perform a dependency override to have you classified as "independent" for FSA purposes. Essentially, this means that you will not have to include your parents' information on the FAFSA at all.\n\nI am always willling to take the above information into consideration.  However, even when I have adjusted for these things, often the student's eligibility doesn't change because their EFC doesn't change much.  (Keep in mind that a $5,000 decrease in income doesn't equal a $5,000 decrease in your EFC.)\n\nThere are a lot of expenses that I won't take into consideration.  For example, the FAFSA does not ask applicants about debt at all -- so if your school was to take your debt into consideration, they would have to do so for everyone at their school.  Moreover, when students appeal based on extraordinary living costs, the emphasis needs to be on the basics: rent/mortgage, utilities, transportation, etc.  It is important to know that the federal methodolody (used to calculate the EFC) has *already* left room for many expenses by sheltering a portion of the family's income/assets (through something called the "income protection allowance" and "asset protection allowance"). So, although many parents have additional costs (i.e. a child needs braces, someone's car needs repairs, someone else attends private elementary/secondary school...), these miscellaneous expenses are already accounted for (to a point).   Quite frankly, everyone (inclluding very poor people) has bills, so that doesn't really make for an extraordinary circumstance.\n\nShould you decide to approach, your FA officer, be prepared to not only *talk* about the bills but also provide copies of them.  Your school *must* document any changes that they make to your FAFSA data.  Schools are audited on a very regular basis, and if it is found that they did not follow protocol or "broke the rules," their ability to administed financial aid to future students (including you) could be seriously jeopardized.\n\nEDIT: The CSS Profile is a form that your school can request to help them calculate your eligibility for their *institutional* funding; it can't be used to assess your eligibility for federal aid.  It goes *much* more in dep
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It is not a sentence...\n\nBeneath the noted universal concerns there lies a distinctive world view.\n\n Or better yet use a semi colon after the word preceeding but ..then replacing it with however and a comma...like this \n\n" ; however, beneath these universal concerns there lies a distinctive worldview."
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That sounds like a subsidy, but that doesn't fit.  What other words do you have crossing the blanks?
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Use a verb in past tense (hacer - mandar - pedir and such verbs that denote you asked for something or you ordered something) and the main verb in infinitive.\n\nFor example:\n\nI have the car fixed: [Yo] hice arreglar el auto\n\nThey have the house cleaned: Ellos mandaron limpiar la casa
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No, it isn't correct.  Correct usage would be, "Has he got the money?" or "Did he receive the money?" or "Has he received the money?"
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Can you use it in a sentence?
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Good.  Just don't start your second sentence with "but."\nGet rid of your but and things will be better.  Incidentally, this is the same advice Queen Latifah received at her doctor recently.
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- To be frank. Yes i can.\n- I did already my name changed.\n- Do you want to do?\n- all the best.\n-----------
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Your sentence doesn't make a great deal of sense because you can't have a question mark in the middle of a sentence.\n\nI'd go with two words:  thank you.
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The first one is correct.\n\nThe second would be correct if you changed the is to has.\n\nHTH