do think she would like this poem?
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Heh, cute. You should mention to her that she's the apple at the top of the tree and that you're willing to climb for her. \n\n:)
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no way man, i didnt even read this poem and i know its a bad idea. if you like a girl and nothing is going down yet, a poem will sink your ship my friend. way, way too much. think simpler
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Well I am a romantic at heart so I like stuff like this. The trick is to do little romantic things out of the blue when she least expects it....and not too often (i.e every day) then it will become too mushy or even smothering. But if you surprise her now and then it would be great. And not on those special days like, birthdays, holidays, and anniversaries.\n\nA good example of a surprise would be, say she comes home after a bad day at work. She tells you all about it, you listen and tell her it will be alright. Then the next day she's at work, and she receives that poem via, email, telegram, whatever. And suddenly her work day just got better. Even a non-mushy girl would appreciate that. \n\nShe'll enjoy it. No matter what, how or when you give it to her. Just be honest and straight from the heart. It should work fine.
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Maybe she needs the money?\nReally don't know\n\n\nLC
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All of your poems make me want to cry! They are so beautiful, and Ashley would be proud of you and would love you soooo much if she were here to read them! You are such a loving soul, and Ashley was a very lucky girl to have ever had you in her life!!!
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it is actually pretty good. i like it. don't give up you should keep writing poems, i read it and i can almost feel what you felt when you wrote the poem. Good job.\n\ni write lyrics and i wish i could make them somehow a lil darker then they come out to be and you showed me that it is possible that i just need to work on it more,  your poem is great.
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If it has some meaning to it......I think it would be a little wierd if you just gave it to her out of the blue.....maybe instead, to have a little fun with it, you can teach her how to make one....this way, you get to spend time with her AND she gets her flower......=)
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awwwww. i love it, if my fiance wrote that poem for me, i would have fallen in love with him all overs again.
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There are a lot of poems out there.  Could you be a little more specific in what you're looking for?
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yeah, write another poem =] it sounds like things are going well and theres a really good chance she'll say yes if you ask her out..good luck! =]
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Her heart?\n\nAt least, that would make a good Hallmark card.
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Wow, that is so beautiful.\nNo, it does not sound like a letter, it's definately a poem and it has a story somewhere in there. I wouldn't mind hearing it, i'm interested. I've written a few poems but they're not constructed well like yours is very well done. mine all have stories burried somewhere in them. How i came to writting whatever i wrote or what they're about.\n\nbest of luck, and keep on rolling\n~just a Youngling\n\nps. i chocked on a paperclip because that's how i roll
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Nice poem!!!! can I quote?
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Do you think it will make more sense through a poem?
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i think that would depend on the giver. but generally, as long as it was given from the heart with sincerity and thought, thats all that matters; not its material value.\n\nbut to answer your question, at this very moment, i would say a song, a poem, or an artwork inspired by me.
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Do I think she would? No.\n\nDo I pray she does? Oh God yes.
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Dear Legggsss2002,\nThere is no one on this earth more qualified to answer that question than YOU....By his every action,comment and gesture he answers that question every day....all I can say is open your eyes and open your mind and the answer to that question will come to you. I sincerely hope you like what you find.\nAlso, thank you for your encouraging remarks about my poem,"Once".