Can anyone think of a thesis statement for this writing prompt?
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I always told myself that someday I'd go visit Hawaii.  Since I just won $5,000 in a local contest, I decided I'll use the money and take my mom along with me to Hawaii.....\n\n\nAnother idea:\n\nSomeday, I'll get even. That's what I tell myself every single time my little brother barges into my room while I'm getting dressed.  Today is the last time he does this. Today is the day I'm going to get even.....\n\n\nI hope you find a good story to write!
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Just find a good way to summarize your essay. You could try several things, but my main strategy would be to stress the importance of the thesis statement of the essay in the first line, and then elaborate on it with all possible points summarized.. each of which should have been stated in the body of the essay.
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I hope you're more informative in your thesis.  What's the subject?
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write the exact homework question   lol
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Sounds like the beginning of a homework assignment!
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Sounds like an essay.\n\nDo your own homework.
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Is this your own assignment?  What I would do first is see if there is any certain topic you have to find for class.  Let's use English as our subject.  So, find a book that you like and find a long paragraph!  The main idea is the main point that the author is trying to get across.  This is usually in the first or the last sentence.  Then the supporting details are the ones that give more meaning to the main idea.  \n\nAn exmaple:  A main idea would be, "Tom Thumb is a small man."  and your supporting details would be, "He is so small that he is only the size of someone's thumb.  He got lost in my pocket once!  A cat mistook him for a mouse!"\n\nAfter you read the supporting details, you understand exactly how small Tom is.  The next paragraph might have the main idea about how Tom is funny.  The next might be about how Tom eats a lot of food.\n\nThe other post is a good way of showing how when you write an essay or a book that all the main ideas get put together to form one big idea.  All of my examples put together could be an essay with the main idea, or subject, about, "The Man Called Tom Thumb."\n\nHope this illustrates your questtion!  Good luck with main ideas... you are on your way to being a great writer!
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sounds like homework....\n\ntsk, tsk.\n\nwell make sure you properly annotate your work.\n\n Lookslike speakeasy did your work.. he/she gets my vote
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explain that you enjoy helping people, want to contribute to society, bullet point the reasons before you type them in.\nAlso write about you're good points. Universities love gloating
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Could you put a few more details in as im not sure if you are asking a question or making a statement...:D
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Sounds like an interesting essay\n\nhere is a good outline of stuff to consider\n\nhttp://www.oup.com/uk/orc/bin/9780199261246/01student/routes/11agri/
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I would be happy to help you write your essay.  Please pick a topic that you are familiar with.  Have you ever been to the fair or public library?  Well, which ever situation you have been in tell me and we will get started.  You can reply to this message by clicking on my name or pic and then clicking the contact coloryst button.  Best wishes
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I think this might help you with your essay.\n\nhttp://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/557/01/
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Well with most thesis statements you have to pick a side of the arguement.  What is your side of the arguement?  Lets start there.  \nWhatever you do...don't make your thesis statement a question.\nIf you need help IM me, not2tall66.  I'm on Yahoo IM most of the day.
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please rephrase and give details
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ok\nshow me a picture of it , or write it out.
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Do you mean a single composition. If so it is simply Introduction, Conclusion and in between these, each paragraph must deall with one particular point.\n\nIf this is not your question come back to me.