MAY anyone HAVE A LOOK AT MY ESSAY AND TELL ME WHERE ARE MY MISTAKES(HONESTLY)?
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there are a lot of spelling mistakes which u can correct by running it thru spell check.but if u expect people in this forum to rephrase or change words it will b difficult.try giving it to friends or family who are good in creative writing to do that.
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Try using a thesaurus or dictionary, and rewrite it in your own words.  You should get it.  If I helped you, that might be cheating.
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You have GOT to be kidding!! Are you writing a doctoral thesis? Certainly you do not expect anyone on this site to do your work for you, do you? Don't you represent the future hopes of us old fogies? Well, then we depend on you to do your own studying!! Get with it!!
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The other answers were valid and good advice.  I would add that you should critically look at the short paper and see if you could outline it.  If your points follow smoothly you should easily be able to create an outline from what you've written.  If you can't, maybe some re-organization is in order.  As a last thought for you, the adage "tell them what you're going to tell them, then tell them, and then tell them what you told them" will make sure you have a beginning, a middle with your information, and a summary (beginning and summary can just be a short sentence).    Since your essay is short, I've included a link to a short article speaking about seven steps to writing a good essay.  Good luck.  Hope you get an Excellent written in red across the top!
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Just find a good way to summarize your essay. You could try several things, but my main strategy would be to stress the importance of the thesis statement of the essay in the first line, and then elaborate on it with all possible points summarized.. each of which should have been stated in the body of the essay.
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Try the following link.  In fact, do all your essays and what-not from this that particular website. Chock-full of info.
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your question is a bit too general. Do you want ideas for an essay you are writing? Or do you want a copy of a complete essay from somewhere?
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Please don't take this wrong....\n\nDo your own essay!!!!!!!!
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Hey, I am right there with you. My thesis is due on Thursday, May 4th and... here I am. I am almost done though. Just have to tie up all the loose ends and edit.\n\nSend me a message and I will try to help you. Let me know what  your specific topic is and what type of info you need. Smart Kitty will help---no worries :-)
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What will you be addressing in your essay?  I'm assuming you are addressing the pros/cons?  \n\nAdd more detail to your question and I will come back and respond.
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I would rate this essay a B.  There were quite a few grammatical errors and essay rule errors as listed below that I would change to bring up the grade:\n\nDo not use contraction.  In order change it's to it is, wouldn't to would not, don't to do not, let's to let us, doesn't to does not, wasn't to was not, doesn't to does not, you'll to you all, don't to do not, let's to let us and don't to do not.\n\n1st paragraph - 2nd line - ambitious teacher she (change she to who) - charming wife. Mrs. Lana Neville. to charming wife named Mrs. Lana Neville.  Mrs. Lana Neville by itself is not a sentence. 3rd line - question to questions - 5th line - I would change teaches grade one through grade 10 to teaches grades one through ten.  You shouldn't use one actual number and one number word, but you're also not supposed to used actual numbers for the lower numbers so you should use both word numbers. - 6th line - impressed of the skills should be impressed by the skills and she show us should be she shows us and place a comma after So.\n\n2nd paragraph - line 2 - place a comma after moreover and make it one word and change her to she - line 3 - stay on should say stay out of - line 4 - place a comma after otherhand and make it one word and place a period after campus and begin She thinks it as a new sentence.\n\n3rd paragraph - lline 2 - place a comma after In addition - line 3 - boys then should be boys than and you should say she has a harder time instead of she has harder time - last line last word - sake should be sakes because you're talking about more than one boy.\n\n4th paragraph - line 1 - place a comma after predictably and defiantly should be definitely and graphic should be plural (graphics) - line 2 - weather is mispelled in this context - it should be whether - line 4 - be ware is one word - beware and miss behave is one word - misbehave and quite should be quiet - line 5 - there should be a comma after students and but in should be but at - line 6, place a comma after well - line 7 - foward for should be forward to and a astonishing should be an astonishing and place a comma between year and which.\n\nParagraph 5 - line one - place the word a between had and really - line 2 - Put Let us before the word hope and expectation should be plural (expectations) - acheivable year is high should be achievale year are high because expectations is plural changing is to are.  Make Just do not worry one sentence and begin Do your best as another sentence.\n\nI hope this helps out.
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you think I am going to write an essay here?\ngo do your own homework!
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revision? edition? correction? amendment?
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I'm sorry, the company rules do not permit me to.\n\nWhat do you mean about an essay? Are you expecting us to do your homework for you?
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ok, post your essay and we will read it!
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ooo rough day for u huh? i hope the future days are better!\n\ni think i would probably also give my day a 4 since all i did the whole day was do a project...and its soooo boring...i have no idea what to write...and its due monday\n=/\n\ni hope ur day tomorrow is a LOT better than today! =]
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I could send you my uni essay on the EU to give you inspiration, but you can't copy it because it's been uploaded onto a plagarism data base.  give me an e-mail at junk_mail_100@yahoo.com.au  We've had about 5 lectures on the EU so I might be able to help you